Rare coincidence of a script with Shivaji, Athidhi
Posted by Ashok Varma on Monday, June 2nd, 2008
Hi all, this post is regarding a script that got coincided with the key elements of Shivaji, Athidhi…movies.
ee script nenu writer avudaamanna target toh vrasukunna scriptslo naa favorite one. idi SHIVAJI, ATHIDHI…movies release avvadaaniki chala months munde develop chesukunna concept. ee story thought raagaane nenu yento excite ayyaanu. oka telugu film producer ee scriptnu almost ok chesaaru. full fledged gaa develop cheyyamannaru. appude cinematic gaa naa lifelo pedda shockkk….
Around 15 predicted story concepts on SHIVAJI circulate ayyuntaayi kaani veetillo yedee correct kaaledu…but to my utter, bitter shock….nenu anukunna script idealoni key element SHIVAJI storylo key point toh coincide ayyindi. nenu Shankar ki abhimanini.
kaani tana rangelo aalochinchinanduku anandapadalo leka manchi story point miss ayinanduku badhapadaalo teliyaledu. however naa ill luckku chala rojulu badhapadina tarvata terukunnanu. appati nunchi inkaa jerks vastoone vunnaayi…recently ATHIDHI cinemalo koodaa ide script nunchi oka key point coincide ayyindi. yemi cheyyaalo teliyaka navvukunnanu. Usually I’m very much afraid of plagiarism, anduke story points yekkada open cheyyanu…but ee cinemallo coincide ayina aa elementsnu inko waylo use chesukunna vidhanam nalugurukee choopistey iddaranna chaduvutaaru….okkaranna interesting gaa vundi anukuntaaru anna aim to
posting it….
kontamandiki idantaa gas anipinchochchu…but don’t know the way to prove my originality….
If you have time please go through it…
indulo coincide ayina elements ne post chestunnaanu….inkaa novelty vunna elements future scripts lo vaadukovalanna talamputo skip chestunnaa..
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(Casting oohinchukunnadi,
Mahesh Babu, Genelia, Prakash Raj…inka remaining characters didn’t think of any specific person.)
Main Title: Skipped
Alternate Titles: Paurudu..the citizen, Takkari (ivi koodaa vachchesaayi)
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Scenes while titles are scrolled: Skipped
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Mahesh(Hero), Ramesh anna dammulu..kaani okari polikalu okariki assalu undavu. Twins kaadu. Ramesh pedda vaadu. vaalliddaru chaala manchi friendz laaga untaaru. veella talli dandrulu chaala manchi vaaru. Veella family anta ento anyonyanga untundi. Ramesh choodadaaniki rough gaa untaadu(kandalu,meesaalu) kaani character chaala soft. Mahesh choodadaaniki chaala soft gaa, handsome gaa untaadu kaani chese vanni allari panulu. Mahesh chesina panulanni Ramesh ki chuttu kuntoo untaayi. Mahesh amaayakanga tappinchukuntuntaadu. Sumati, Kaalamati, Mandamati…chepala kadhalo Ramesh Sumati type aite Mahesh Kaalamati type. Ramesh anni panulu chaala jaagratta gaa chesesi chaala planned gaa untaadu. Mahesh antaa instant action fast relief levello time vachchinappudu maatrame react ayyi bayatapade type. Life ni chaala easy ga teesukuntuntaadu. kaani avasaram vachchinappudu maatram chaala sharp gaa untaadu. tana importance antaa parents, annayya, friendz…veella kosam godava padadaanikainaa ye maatram venukaadadu. tanakemaina tana parents ni choosukodaaniki Ramesh unnaadani Mahesh nammakam. inta allari chestunna Mahesh ni vaalla parents yemi anaru. chaala gaarabham gaa penchutaaru.Mahesh ki tana annayya ante chaala sentiment. Ramesh chaala amaayakudu. Mahesh ku chaala talents untaayi. Palmistry, Graphology,..etc. andariki yeppudoo shocks istuntaadu.
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Hero introduction scene: skipped
Heroine introduction scene: skipped
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Citylo roju roju ku rowdies perugutuntaaru. vaalla valla crime koodaa perigipotuntundi. alaanti timelo, vallandariki “Om” anna atani nunchi, phone calls vastaayi. ee Om chaala special person. itanu evariki phone cheste vaaari gontu toney maatlaadutuntaadu. Aa talent untundi.
“nenu mee munduku oka kotta idea toh vachchanu. Idi 50-50 deal offer. Meeranta intavaraku annee chinna chinna amounts kosam enno crimes chestoo unnaaru. Saadharaanangaa meeku inta offer evvaru ivvaru. Naa idea yemitante, meeru inta varaku middle class vaallanu..chetaagaani vaallanu target chesukuntunnaaru… yentamandani vaallane target chestaaru ? ilaa prati daaniki vaalla meede depend aitey workout avvadu. kaani baaaga corruption chesinavaallu..akramanga dabbu sampaadinchinavaallu aaa pani already chesi mana pani tagginchaaru..vaallu ee janam nunchi kottesina dabbu, ippudu vaalla daggara undi..manam vaalla daggara nunchi kotteyyaali. veellandari daggara konni vandala kotla black money undi.
So entoh mandi common people nunchi dochukoni veellu sampadhinchina aa black moneyne mana target. nenu yedi chesinaa paddati prakaaram chestaanu. Meeku idi koncham kastam kaani okasaari alavaatayyindante..ok..chaaala dabbu vastundi..ee pani meeru single gaa cheyyalante chaala kastam meeku anni nenu yerpaatu chestaanu..risk meeru teesukovaali.. anduke 50-50 share. Mee payment ki ye dokaa undadu. ippude aalochinchukondi. okkasaari oppukunnaka mee nunchi ye tedaa vachchina..meeru bratakadam asaadhyam. ee vishyam yevvarito discuss cheyyakoodadu. Meerem chestunnaro aakhariki mee manassakshiki koodaa
teliyakoodadu. Naaku naa daariki addochche vaarini saadhyamainanta twaraga dooram cheyyadam alavaatu. Naaku businesslo competitors ante parama asahyam. “
(ee rules annintini rowdiesku explain chesey scenelo different rowdies daggara konni konni pointsni Om vaalla respective gontulatoney chebutunnattu choopistaam. ee Om evaro choopincham. idantaaa …ante Om undey scenes annee chaala stylish gaa choopistaam.)
Idi vinna ee rowdies antaa ee idea ku impress avutaaru. Sontamgaa chesukundaaamanukunte Om saamaanyudu kaadani vaddanukuntaaru. So andaru oppukuntaaru. Prati okkaru, yevvarikee cheppakundaa…plan implementationloki digipotaaru.
ilaa unnattundi corrupted officers meeda rowdies padi dochukuntaaru. Vaallaki veellu ichchedi rendey options:
1. vaallu dochukunnade kaakundaa vaari aastinantaa ichchi vesi zero state ki vachcheyyadam.
Or
2. praanaalu pogottukovadam
andaroo modati daanike oppukuni zero state ki vachchestaaru. Police complaint ivvaaalannaa mottam vishayam bayataku vaste tama bandaaram bayatapadutundani ye corrupted officer ivvadu. Oka vela complaint istey yenta amount poyyindo sarigga cheppaleru.
Maximum amount black moneyney untundi, legal amount chaala takkuva untundi kabatti. aamaatram daani kosam complaint iste malli rowdies toh problem vastundani yevvaru ivvaru.
Om rowdies toh phonelo maatladetappudu, rowdies feeling antaa Om oka Dawood Ibrahim laaga ye Dubai lono Bangkok lono undi idantaa nadipistunnadu anukuntaaru kaani oka situation lo oka veedhilo oka end lo rowdy untaadu ade veedhilo inkoka end lo rowdy ni choostu Om phonelo maatladutundadam choopistaam. ilaa Om vaalla pakkane undi idantaa chepistunnaadani choopistaam.
ilaa chaala jorugaa dopideelu jarugutuntaayi. Om chaala pakka gaa 50-50 payment chestuntaadu. deenitoh rowdies inkaa utsaahangaa pani chestuntaaru. Next steplo Om ide plan ni city nunchi town level ki teesukostaadu. ippudu city rowdylu, boss lu. vaallaku telisina town rowdiesku plan cheppi akkada corrupted officers ni dochukunelaa chestaaru. Main amountlo 50% Om ki ichchi, migata 50% vaallu panchukuntaaru. ilaa Andhra Pradesh, Karnataka, Tamil Nadulo konni areas lo sensational gaa dopideelu jariguntuntaayi kaani okka complaint undadu. oka pakka Om daggara konni vandala kotlu accumulate avutuntaayi. rowdies koodaa baaga sampaadhinchukuntaaru.
antaku mundi two wheeler range lo office ku povaalsina officers, corruption valla carlo potuntaaru. vaari stage zero ku raavadam toh, cyclelo povadam..peon..etc officelo andaroo idi choosi shock tinadam choopistam.
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Police/CBI/IB officers, media ku koodaa ee dopideela vishayam antu chikkadu. Unnattundi, cityloh, stateloh crime rate baaga taggipoyi untundi. deeniki kaaranam yentaa ani pariseeliste, mottam perumosina rowdies antaa vaalla regular panulu vadilesi, yedo kotta pani start chesaaru. ..etc kaani anta neat gaa trace cheyyaleru. Oka pakka politicians …etc vallandariki vaalla panulu chesi pette manushulu karuvavutuntaaru. assalu yemi jarugutundo yevvariki arthamkaadu.
‘Prakash’ aa Citylo perumosina rowdy. full domination toh dhaurjanyam chestoo dabbu sampayinche type. itaniki vipareetamaina dabbu pichchi. Already sampadinchina dabbuto konni rojulu relax avudaamani, alaa world tour ki velli jalsa chesi vachchuntaadu. atanu world tourlo unnappude Om matter antaa jariguntundi. itanini Om yeppudu contact ayyundadu. Prakash city ki tirigi raagaane, citylo chaala tedagaa undani gamanistaadu. veedi paata manushule veedu cheppe panulu cheyyamantaaru. reason adigite chepparu. yedo jarugutondi ani Prakash excite ayyi daanni trace chese kramamlo Om plan gurinchi telisi shock tintaadu. Wow !!! ee idea naakenduku raaledura ani feel avutaadu. Om ni contact avvaali ani anukuni, yela yela yela ani teevra tension padutunte, Om nunche call vastundi deento shock tintaadu. adi koodaa tana voice toney Om maatlaadatam inkaa pedda shock. Om same plan Prakash ki explain chestaadu. Prakash oppukuni, chaala excite ayyanu ika choodu naa tadaaka anukuni, yekanga corrupted Police officers ni kooda vadilipettakundaa..veellanu koodaa dochukuni 50% Om ki istaadu.
appudey Prakash ku inkaa pedda shocking news telustundi, Om idi evvaru oohinchani rangelo yenta pedda networkgaa naduputunnado ani. ippatike konnni vela kotlu Om daggaraku cheraayani telisi shock tintaadu. ade time lo intelligence vaallu trace chesina information prakaaram, India lo richest person kannaa, unofficial gaa richest person unnaadani, atanu ippudu ye country lo unnado kooda teliyadani, itane kaaka chaala mandi rowdies koteeswarulu ayyarani telustundi.
kaani yelaa ayyaru ..veellaku inta dabbu yelaa vachchindi etc details teliyavu ani cheptaaru. Prakash ku ipppudu fresh gaa dochukundaamanukunna already ee chuttupakkala areas antaa Om cover chesi black money mottam
khaali chesaadu. Chaa..anukuni ..so inka ee dabbantaa kaavaalante, inta mandini dochukunna Om ney dochukovaalani decide avutaadu.
inka Om ni pattukovaalani viswa prayatnaalu chestaadu. kaani Om ni anchanaveyyatamlo yeppudu porabadutuntaadu.
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oka pakka Mahesh chaala jolly gaa tirugutuntaadu..heroine..comedy..love track anni jarugutuntaayi..
Love Track: skipped
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INTERVAL BANG:
ee kramamlo Om okasaari Prakash traplo padinattu kanipistaadu aa situationlo chaala exciting gaa Prakashki Om koddilo miss avutuntaadu chivaraku Prakash gang antaa Om ni chuttu mudataaru aa moment lo Prakash, Om ni choosi chaala shock tintaadu.
Nuvvaa ? antaadu..
appudu choopistaam Om evaraa ani, atanu evarantey …………..(Fill in the blanks)
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mee interest levels teliyavu…atleast 10 guesses vastey will post the continuation….or else will stop this stuff here itself….
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Thanks for the nice response from all of you for taking time to read it and opine u r views.
As there were only 3 characters focussed in the story, many have guessed one among them. I had to skip many scenes in the narration and I gave only the things that are related to the points coincided in those movies.
Anywayz…as per the story that I prepared at that time, let me fill in the blank in the Interval bang…..
appudu choopistaam Om evaraa ani, atanu evarantey RAMESH
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likithon 03 Jun 2008 at 5:21 am 1ok vundi story kani aa om mahesh ani andaru guess cheyochu
srion 03 Jun 2008 at 5:23 am 2hi
may be Om is mahesh??????
ushaon 03 Jun 2008 at 11:57 am 3either mahesh or ramesh..
Srinu, the Director!on 03 Jun 2008 at 6:48 pm 4Interval bang lo nuvvu Ramesh, Mahesh, Prakash la lo ye okkarini Om ga chupinchavante U were failed as screen writer. Varu kakunda inkevarinaian chupinchi saraina reason pettagaligithe U r succeeded.
sunnyon 04 Jun 2008 at 5:58 am 5Better show Mahesh as Om at the interval, but Hide Ramesh character from the story.(ante Ramesh character vundani chupinchaku)
But later show that there is a character Ramesh who is the real Om and brother of Mahesh.
tejaswinion 04 Jun 2008 at 12:35 pm 6chala bagundii…
pokiri cinema andaru chusesaru kabatti andaru esy ga guess cheyagalgutaru oka vela mahesh om aithe..ramesh om aithe baguntadiii…
OM evaru ??on 04 Jun 2008 at 11:58 pm 7rajini kanth ni OM cheyyi [:P].
ok ga undhi story indulo sivaji loni keelaka maina point enti ??? corrupted officials ni dochukovatama ??? and athidi part aythey ardham ayyidhi hero ne villan laaga om vesham vesadu ani anyways kadha poorthi ayyaka chuddam ento paristhithi
tharunon 07 Jun 2008 at 4:32 am 8///////Better show Mahesh as Om at the interval, but Hide Ramesh character from the story.(ante Ramesh character vundani chupinchaku)
But later show that there is a character Ramesh who is the real Om and brother of Mahesh.////
Ashok Varmaon 08 Jun 2008 at 5:50 am 9Tanya gave an orkut scrap:
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hi sir..i read d story which u have posted in mahesh’s community…i just loved it..i wish tht story wud really turn up in to a movie..it was tooo gud..
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Thanks a lot Tanya.
sreeon 08 Jun 2008 at 11:12 pm 10babai enti chusthunte prakash raj lanti inkokadu OM ga chalamani aythey bagundu anipisthundi [:P] . eppudu heros ye double action enduku gajini ni kuda kalipesi iddaru villans ni petteyachhu kada