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‘Love Is a Trap’ – By Priyatham

Posted by Ashok Varma on Thursday, November 27th, 2008


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PART – 2

LOVE IS A TRAP {a medical college love story}

by priyatham

PART – 1

Location : kakinada Rangaraya medical college.

Narration is from girl’s (saranya) side:

Internal exams aypoyayi, hostel lo andharu “nuvvosthanantey nenodhantaana” aney movie ki bayaluderaru. old room mate priya vachi “nannu rammanna raanannanu”. Oka paavu ganta sepu brathimilaadi tanoo vellipoyindhi.

Taruvatha anipinchindhi , tanu anthaga pilichina endhuku ‘no’ cheppaenu ani.? Ardamayyindhi. Exams ki 10 days mundununchi prashanthata ledhu , cinema antey hadavidi , so manasu prashanthata korukuntundhi.kasepu gudiki velli kurchuntey baguntundhi anipinchindhi.room ki velli heater on chesi thalaraa snanam chesi ganji pettina udhaa rangu chudidhaar vesukunnanu. Adhey rangu chunni ….chunni vesukuntundaga gurthochadu “Hruday” . 4 months kritham anukuntaa ….! Inter medical college cultural programmes kalisi organize chesthunnapudu evarithono chepthuntey vinnanu ..” prema desam cinema lo Tabu vesukunnattu chunni vedalpu madathaho ninduga vesukuntey ye ammai kyna chala muchataga untundhi ” ani.  Alochisthuney chunni premadesam style lo hundaga neat ga vesukunnanu.

Padhi nimishalaki gudiki cheranu . baavi lo neellu thodu kuni kaallantha thadichettu neru paadalapay posukuni , baba gudiki velli taruvatha ganapathini , ayyappani , dathathreyuni,  palakarinchi  subramanyeswarunini daggariki vachesaraki edhuruga hruday . eppudu vachado kani kallarpakunda nanney gamanisthunnadu “hai” antu palakarinchadu , “hello” anti china chiru navvu kalipi response ichi subramanyeswarunini kuda palakarinchi vacheppudu kuda nanney chusthunnadu . koncham sigguga anipinchi tala dinchukunnau.

Monna kotha room mate ‘neetha’ anna matalu gurthochayi ” ey saranya ! nenu pakkaga oka vishayam cheppagalanu , hruday neku try chesthunnadu, class lo ne vypu chudatam chala sarlu gamaninchaanu”.

“antha scene ledhu le” ani kottiparesanu.two days taruvatha pharmacology class lo ‘deepika’ chupinchindhi athanu na vypey chudatam .ventaney pakkaney unna neetha cheppindhi ” nenu monnaney cheppanu, he is in love with u , so we are going to see a new pair in our class anamata” ani.ventaney nenu “never, athanu luv chesthey enti nenu cheyyaliga annanu. ” hruday kenti good looking cool guy pyga intelligent chap nekenti abyantharam andhi” “aithey entanta! Naku love medha nammakam ledhu Love is a trap”  annnanu.

“Hellllloooo saranyaaa” kastha gattiganey pilichadu hruday…appudu yi lokam loki vachanu.ala nadusthu matladukundama annadu.okkadhanney temple kochi bukkaypoyana anukuntu ..munipanta gollu korakasaganu.

“Me ammayilantha intey chaduvu perutho challani sayanthralani champeyatanikythey siddam kani saradaga nalugu kaburlu cheppukundham antey mathram oppukoru…!” annadu oppukoka thappindhi kaadhu.

Gudi bayataki raganey gaddi lo ‘thooneega’ni chupisthu eppudyna vatitho adukunnava annadu …”ledhu intlo okasari tube light daggara chusanu” annanu…city ammay vanipinchukunnav ani satire vesadu.vatitho chinnappudu cheruku chelala adukuney vaadata.thoonega rekkalu sensitiveness ni bugga geresina cheruku noogu rough attitude ni nerpinchayata….koncham sontha dabbalaaa anipinchinaa kuda intresting anukunna manasulo.

PART – 2

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5 Responses to “‘Love Is a Trap’ – By Priyatham”

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  2. Rajion 27 Dec 2008 at 10:06 pm 2

    idi real story naa??

  3. Rajion 27 Dec 2008 at 10:19 pm 3

    idi real aa??

  4. tejaswinion 05 Jan 2009 at 4:30 pm 4

    when r u gonna post 3rd part?

  5. priyathamon 11 Jan 2009 at 7:00 am 5

    @ tejaswani ….there is no 3rd part …its the end of the story ..happy ending rest is left to imagination …tell me what did u like in the story and what u did not like.

    @raji …its not a real story exclusively my brain child. kakapothey ila cheddamanukune vadini college days lo…hahha.

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