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‘Love Is a Trap’ – 2 By Priyatham


PART – 1

LOVE IS A TRAP {a medical college love story}

by priyatham

PART – 2

inka chinnathanamlo chesina chilipi panulennitinoo gurthu chsukunnadu. science note book lo dachina nemali kannu dhaniki food ga pettina pencil podi, english  text book lo dachina  kaaki bangaram[mica] , telugulo matladinandhuku teacher ki cheppi phine kattisthanani bedhirinchina class leader, lancham ga thesukunna lolly pop, 7th class lo collect chesina big fun wrappers , 10th class lo tanu try chesina madhavi latha ippudu entha lavu aypoyindhonani ila enno vishayalu thanu chepthu nannu aduguthunnadu….

alaa matallo padi ala kakinada banugudi center daati “over bridge” py varaku vachesamu.akkada aagi ikkada kasepu matladukundaam matladukundam annadu. nenu koncham moham chitlinchi ” ikkada ?? ila buzy gaa carlu buslu thiruguthuntey ikkada agudham antaventi ” annanu. topic divert chesthu ” ne favourite food edhi ani adigaadu ” haveli  restaurant lo chicken reshmi kabaab and boneless biryani istam” ani cheppanu,

neekemistam ani adiganu ” amma chesina vulava charu lo meegada perugu vesukuni thintey vachey taste inka dentlonu raadhu ” annadu ….monna biochemistry lab lo latha cheppindhi horse gram extract antey ulavacharenanai…anthabaguntundha anukunnanu.”inka emi thintavu ” ani adiganu “istam leni koora antu emi ledhu” annadu ‘hmmm! evaro kani lucky girl ” manasulo anukoboyi pyki anesaanu .iddaram thalonchukuni navvukunnam, inthalo ala chooodu antu padamara vypu chupinchaadu
nijangaa chaala adbuthanga undha drusyam errani banthilaa sooryidu ,aa krindha raabbesu matti rangulo aakasam, inka krindha emo aa veluthuru padi merusthunna railu pattalu , inka alavatulo porapatemo pani aypoyina coolie okathanu tana 7-8 yrs vayasunna pillavadini tana bujalapy ekkinchukuni mosthunnadu. aa pillavaadu ma vypu chusi cheyya oopadu , hruday kuda tanaki cheyyi oopadu ,” ey! entala evariki padithey vallaki ala cheyyi oopesthunnav” annanu, manam happyga undatamey kadhu chinna chinna panulatho chuttu unna vallani kuda happyga unchali anukuntuntanu nenu …a chinna pilladi kallalo entha anandamo choodu …ayna nenemi ye ammayko cheyyi ooopaledhu kadha endhuku nuvvu feel avuthunnav ” annadu

hruday mark sattire padindhi ani manasulo anukuni …nenedhuku feel avuthanu just adiganu anthey ani thappinchukunnanu. “ippudu ardamayyindha ikkada enhuku agudham annano ..” annadu. “thanq hruday ! this is the best suset view that i have ever seen in kakinada ” annnanu.

malli venakki nadusthu “bakers inn” ki velleamu “rendu butter scotch icecreams order chesadu…oho na tastes kocnham telusanamaata anukunnanu. ice cream thintu ma abhiruchilu share chesukunnam. nenu “sakhi” move istam antey tanu “anand ” istam annadu, nenu “mahesh babu ” istam antey thanu “chiranjeevi is my al time fav” annadu , nenu suryadevara rasina “mano yagnbam” gurchi chepthey thanu yandamoori “anando brahma ” gurchi cheppeadu.nenu shiv kher “U CAN WIN” gurchi chepthey thanu rbin sharma “the monk who sold his ferrari” gurchi cheppadu.nenu Robincook ” out break ” gurchi chepthey thanu ” 6th chromosome ” istam annadu.

Bill pay chesaka “enti hruday mana tastes okkati kalavalehu” antey…” deeni lo vintha emi undhi . iddaru vyakthulu veru veru kutumbalalo putti , veru veru environments lo different friends tho periginappudu valla abiprayalu , abhiruchulu same ela avuthay saranya” annadu.thanala caringa vidamarchi cheppatam chaala nachindhi.

alaaa naduchukuntu R.M.C. [rangaraya medical college] main gate varaku vachesaamu. kkadanunchi endhuko iddaram chaala slow ga nadichamu. hostel daggara paduthuntey ” manchi coffe akari sip thaguthunnattu ” anipinchindhi.bye saranya ani cheppi hadavidi ga vellipoyadu hruday …bahusa gudi daggara vadilesina thana pulser gurchi kangaranukuntaa.

byee ani cheppaney kani inkocnham sepu matladalanipinchindhi edho teliyani madhuranuboothi , adhorakamyna baadha kalagalisina feeling.”manakistamyna song walkmen lo vintundaga cells aypoyina feeling”.aa rathri thana maataley gurthu raasagayi. next day early morning 7 o clock ki evaro visitors vacharani chepthey kallunulumukuntu evara antu velli chusthey eduruga hruday   “HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U SARANYA” ani cheppadu ..adhenti na birthday ki inka 4 days time undhiga “   anannau    ” avunu correctey kani nenu ivvala afternoon inyikelthunnanu inko 1 week varaku raanu …idhigi ne birthday gift ” ani oka isaka nimpi unna andhamyna tray ichadu…”ayyo nuvvundatledhaa! ..ayna yi sand tray enti ” ani adiganu ” adhi nenu cheppanu nuvvu roju koncham water chilakaristhu undu ..ne birthday roju nekey ardamavuthundhi,,,sarey mari nenu untanu byeee” antu pulser start chesi vellipoyadu.

jagartha ga aa tray ni room ki thesukuni velli thanu cheppinattey roju koncham water spray chesanu …3rd day evo chinna chinna molakalu vachayi….hmm intresting chuddam repu anukunnanu ..na birthday roju poddunney lechi tray chusey sariki na kallani nene nammalekapoyanu andamyna aavala mokkalu ” I LUV U” aney aakaram lo othugaa darsanamichayi. chaala anandam ga anipinchindhii.preminchadamey kaadhu premani intha andanga express chesina hruday ni miss avatama ! never anipinchindhi. inthalo roomate neetha ” ey saranyaa! love is a trap kadheyy” andhi . “yeslove is a trap , but better to fall in it ” ani cheppi hruday mobile number kosam vethakasaaganu.

-subham-

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(If you wanna post such write ups do send them to ayaskantam.com@gmail.com)

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Filed in Ispecial | 14 responses so far

14 Comments

  • teja says:

    intresting…

  • priyatham says:

    thanq teja

  • Praveen says:

    I like the way u narrated the story !!! but english lo aithae inka bagunnu !!! try this next time

  • priyatham says:

    thanq praveen any how i will give a try in english as per ur suggestion.

  • Raji says:

    ayipoyindaa??

  • Ravindra says:

    Hey it is really nice and Telugu lo chadavatam very interesting ga yunde.. and i felt every scene before my eyes..keep going with such more stuff.. Very Romantic !!

  • priyatham says:

    hi ravindra thanq for the response ….and encouragement …now am trying to write a series of “medical college stories” ….touching all the feeling tragedy, friendship , comedy , romance etc.

    wil post them in a month or so.

    @raji …yes aypoindi story…thats the ending …rest left to ur imaginations.

  • pavani says:

    ayyoo appude ayipoyindhaaaaaaaa…….
    really cute conversation….
    asalu emiiii ledhu…story lo…..
    Bt stilll edho vundhi…….mesmerizing……me…..
    asalu ee website vundhi ani……just now….thelisindhi…
    edho clik cheyaboyi……edho clik chesi……ikkadiki vacha…….
    really nice …..inka regularga visit chestha…..
    plz…keep ur postings in telugu…..english raaka kadhu……..
    chinna chinna matters telugu lo chaala vintene baavunayi…
    nyways…..meeku manchi future vundhi……..
    idhi nijam story na………or …..creativity na….
    o.k thanks 4 evrything……..all the best 4 ur bright futute

  • priyatham says:

    @ pavani thanq a lot …ur words are a lot encouraging ….this is purely my brain child and not at all a real story.

    some supportive comments like these will give lot of energy…though i have interest am not getting proper time to write more…as am now
    in final yr MD

    once again meku specially thanks.

    DR.s.v.k.chaitanya (priyatham)

  • pavani says:

    U r most welcom sir ,
    It’s really nice 2 hear tht…. this is ur’s own art &
    it’s my pleasure 2 write encouragive comments ,
    coz v r expecting more 4m ur pen .
    n thanks 4 reading….
    Gud luck……

  • Anji says:

    Nice article…Well written..ee article chadivina tarwaatha Kakinada ilaa vuntundaa ani anukunnaanu..(i have never been there). Great narration of the surroundings. It doesn’t look as a story..rather a real incident…the nativity was great..title kudaa telugulo vunte inkaa baagundedi…

    Cinema vaallu anthaa doctor kaaboyi actor ayyanu antaaru..meeru ika doctor ayyi…story writer ayyanu antaaremo… :)

    One more thing: meeru cheppinattu medical college stories raasinaa kudaa..maa lanti vaallaki (non medical) kudaa artham ayye terminology ne use chestarani aasistunnanu….

    Thanks again for a short and sweet article.

    All the very best for your new role as a writer

  • priyatham says:

    @ anji
    thanq so much intha detailsdga prasamsinchinandhuku idhey website lo na interview undhi Dr.s.v.k.chaitanya ani search chesthey na interview vasthundhi appudu nenu doctor kaka inkememi avvalanukuntunnano cheppanu kudirithey chadavandi.

    ya ye story rasina universal appeal lekapothey …normal people ki ardamkakunda medical jargon lo rasthey ilanti prasamsalu enno miss avuthanu.

    ika love is a trap adhey mata tho yi love story almost start ayyi end avuthundhi ..and english title chusi chadavalani vachi telugu stories medha makkuva penchataniki upayogapaduthundhani na abhiprayam

    ya telugantey naku kuda chaalaa chaala istam

    with best regards
    priyataham

  • cutestgul says:

    Hmmmm.. M speechless. As I am getting into the story I was so involved that I just forgot dat my mom called me for dinner. And now after knowing it is a story and not a real thing, I was shocked. You have done a great job especially the narrating part, it was like something which happened infront of my eyes. Hope i would play a role like saranya and find my hruday some day lolzzzzz..

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